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[Darfur Satire Shorts]

Lacks originality

Hi there, awesome stuff you made, I always sum stuff up, so lets do it!

Pros:
+ Very funny
+ Great voices
+ The transformer part was cool

Cons:
- Lacks originality
- Animation was very basic, just because South Park does it isn't an excuse

Overall:
Cool stuff you made, sadly you definately lack some originality, but it's cool!

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Chakra-X responds:

Thanks for the review!

Yes, I do recognize that I "rode the coattails" of popular shows, but I wasn't really aiming for originality, but creativity.

However, if I am trying to parody South Park as close as possible, wouldn't it make sense to try to get the animation as close as possible, regardless of the quality of the original?

[Pot Head Bob and a gennie]

Please put some more work in to it

Hi there, you made a very simple flash, it needs a lot of work, I'll sum things up:

Pros:
+ Ehm... there was an end

Cons:
- No preloader (if you can't make one, use the one of NG)
- Very simple art
- Used much too many filters
- The talking style looked dumb
- The voices were over exaggerated
- Sometimes voice were very very soft

Overall:
This isn't a good flash, try working on the audio and don't use filters that often. Also improve on your art. Try using the BBS to find better voice actors.

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D3m0n1c707 responds:

I understand were you are going. If you did not find it funny then thats your opion, but the point of this video was to be pointless, just sit back and have a quick laugh
Thanks

[CandyHolics]

It's ok, yet sometimes lazy parts in the flash

Nice halloween flash, and also reasonably funny, let's sum things up!

Pros:
+ Nice characters
+ Difference in voices
+ Funny

Cons:
- Sometimes you spent too little time on some things (like the robot arms putting the Detective Grimoire suit on, or the part with "Can't Touch This")
- Spelling mistakes
- Some jokes weren't funny (like the 4AM one)

Overall: Nice halloween themed flash, yet some parts didn't have enough work to it (like the subtitles or certain parts).

PostTimeskipSam responds:

You didn't like the 4am one...I kinda liked it, anyways I'll spend more time on the less important things in animation to improve the overall quality.

Thanks for the review
+Hylian-Mafia+

[~GG~ New Year]

GG!

The gear group is awesome! But the movie could be a bit longer, that would also give the GG a good start, now u sort of wasted tthe possibilities by giving it a bad start

Smiley-Bob responds:

Yeah well, I just made this quick for New Years :D.
It wasn't supposed to be getting us members or be anything epic...just something fun!

[Webcamoose!]

Very well done!

The style was really cool, a mix between video and animation. The story was funny and a bit random. I liked the the ghost buster part a lot.

Good Job and make some more cool stuff :)

BritishMoose responds:

I liked that part a lot too and Ido indeed intend to make more cool stuff :)

[Tankman try (unfinished)]

If it isn't finished don't post

If it isn't finished don't post it! We want quality work, not half-finished stuff! Also try doing more stuff than only a tank and some bad music

mattuiop responds:

thank 4