LilFugitive's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Darfur Satire Shorts]

Lacks originality

Hi there, awesome stuff you made, I always sum stuff up, so lets do it!

Pros:
+ Very funny
+ Great voices
+ The transformer part was cool

Cons:
- Lacks originality
- Animation was very basic, just because South Park does it isn't an excuse

Overall:
Cool stuff you made, sadly you definately lack some originality, but it's cool!

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Chakra-X responds:

Thanks for the review!

Yes, I do recognize that I "rode the coattails" of popular shows, but I wasn't really aiming for originality, but creativity.

However, if I am trying to parody South Park as close as possible, wouldn't it make sense to try to get the animation as close as possible, regardless of the quality of the original?

[Sand]

Short but has potential

Hi there, congrats on not getting a blam on your first flash. But as you might have noticed (because of the low score) it isn't perfect. Let's sum things up:

Pros:
+ Originality, I think it's a first time animation featuring stuff being drawn in the sand

Cons:
- Short
- Try making the hit area of the button a rectangle instead of just the text
- Try adding sound fx

Overall:
This isn't a bad flash as first flash, yet it needs improvement. Try adding sound fx and make it longer

[Godzillas Depression]

Lot of work to be done

Hi there, this is very bad for a 2nd attempt animation. I'll sum things up:

Pros:
+ There was an end

Cons:
- Very bad graphics
- Very bad animation
- Dumb storyline (I mean come on, it's just about Godzilla without any balls)
- Needs more sounds (like for the talking)

Overall:
This is a flash that needs a lot of work, try putting some more time in it, this is made like in 2 hours or less. Use more sounds for talking and spend more time on the animation and art, art is something you'll have to learn. But animating is fairly easy, you just need patience

[A piece of puke]

Nice flash with good animation

Nice flash you made, I really enjoyed it, let's sum things up:

Pros:
+ The movements looked very human
+ The music fitted very well with the flash

Cons:
- The flash was short, this would have more potential if you made it longer

Overall:
Very nice flash you made with very vivid and good looking movements. Sadly it was very short, and made the viewer a bit disappointed because he expected much much more.

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[Pot Head Bob and a gennie]

Please put some more work in to it

Hi there, you made a very simple flash, it needs a lot of work, I'll sum things up:

Pros:
+ Ehm... there was an end

Cons:
- No preloader (if you can't make one, use the one of NG)
- Very simple art
- Used much too many filters
- The talking style looked dumb
- The voices were over exaggerated
- Sometimes voice were very very soft

Overall:
This isn't a good flash, try working on the audio and don't use filters that often. Also improve on your art. Try using the BBS to find better voice actors.

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D3m0n1c707 responds:

I understand were you are going. If you did not find it funny then thats your opion, but the point of this video was to be pointless, just sit back and have a quick laugh
Thanks

[The Fairy Future Mother]

Ugly characters

You made an interesting flash with this fairy yet I didn't like it, let's sum things up

Pros:
+ Voices were good
+ Story was good

Cons:
- Ugly characters, really work on the body structure and don't use the pencil that often
- Bad animation, sometimes it looked like he was doing a cripwalk instead of walking
- Blinking looked very bad
- Eyes and mouth looked like that of a girls

Overall:
This is a flash that just should stay in the portal, because of it's nice storyline. But there really needs to be some mayor improvement on the art and animation

[CandyHolics]

It's ok, yet sometimes lazy parts in the flash

Nice halloween flash, and also reasonably funny, let's sum things up!

Pros:
+ Nice characters
+ Difference in voices
+ Funny

Cons:
- Sometimes you spent too little time on some things (like the robot arms putting the Detective Grimoire suit on, or the part with "Can't Touch This")
- Spelling mistakes
- Some jokes weren't funny (like the 4AM one)

Overall: Nice halloween themed flash, yet some parts didn't have enough work to it (like the subtitles or certain parts).

PostTimeskipSam responds:

You didn't like the 4am one...I kinda liked it, anyways I'll spend more time on the less important things in animation to improve the overall quality.

Thanks for the review
+Hylian-Mafia+