LilFugitive's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[//Spanish Intrustion [Fire]]

Too long intro

Hi there, DJ-DairyKing, again you made a song with the spanish guitar, but don't get me wrong, that's a nice bonus. Let's sum things up:

Pros:
+ High quality guitar
+ Nice beat made from snaps and claps

Cons:
- Intro was a bit too long
- Repetitive guitar and beat, try altering it a bit through the song
- Try using the synth thing more often, it seemed a bit out of place

Overall:
Nice song with the spanish vibe to it. However it got a bit repetitive because the beat and guitar stayed constant through out the song

[Spanish Inspiration [Cardiac]]

Wow, spanish and hiphop do fit with eachother!!

Hi there DJ-DairyKing, nice song you made, never thought such a combination could work out so well, let's sum things up:

Pros:
+ Amazing combination
+ Guitar was of very high quality (what did you use to make it?)
+ I had some awesome bass coming out of my subwoofer, really amazing!

Cons:
- The beginning wasn't clear and unnecessary, if you'd like to say something write it in the comments, but this ruined it a lot!
- Beat was a bit repetitive

Overall:
Very interesting song you made with the awesome combination. However the lil speech shouldn't be there and the beat could use some difercity.

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[Man In the Smoking Mirror]

More ambient than DnB

Nice song you made, yet I didn't find this seem like DnB, but some weird combination between ambient and some very soft DnB. Let's sum things up:

Pros:
+ Good intro
+ Piano gave a sort of "spooky" feel to the song

Cons:
- The intro took very long
- The song developed it self very slowly
- The low "doppler-like" sounds should have been used more often

Overall:
Nice song you made with an interesting "ambient-ish" intro, the piano made it spooky, but this isn't DnB.

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WritersBlock responds:

Well, it's kind of a cross-breed of ambient and DnB, the bass and drums are DnB, I've just revolved it around an ambient build up. I think I'd get a reaction saying it wasn'y soft enough for ambient if I put it there, so I don't think it's too out of place here...

But anyway, thanks for the breakdown and review.

Cheers.

[_-_HeatBlastin_-_ (Finished)]

Sick beat yet felt unfinished

Sick beat you got going on there, yet the song wasn't so cool because you missed out on a rap. Try consulting the BBS if somebody would like to rap. I also liked the sort of yo yo yo thing through the song. The piano was also sweet, did you make it with your MIDI keyboard or so?

Well yeah cool song, yet you need to add a rap

[Green, Piano(NB Remastered)]

Wow this is an improvisation!

Amazing that this is an improvisation, it sounded so well planned and didn't seem like you got stuck at any point. Let's sum things up:

Pros:
+ Good beat with a lot of diversity with the drum samples yet not making it too wild (Thanks NB)
+ Great piano, flowing with great diversity
+ Amazing for an improvisation
+ Nice use of the chords in the background

Cons:
- There was an end :P

Overall:
Amazing piece of work seen this is an improvisation. Even though it wouldn't be one it's still amazing, beat is very diverse and sadly there was an end :(. Great job ^_^!!!

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Jurian responds:

Thanks for your long review. Sorry, I can't make songs without an end=(=P Thanks.

[Vondelpark High]

Good Acid Jazz with nice bass

This is a nice acid jazz song that made me real happy, let's sum things up:

Pros:
+ Good opening with the highats and bass, later the bass kick and in the end the piano
+ The bass was very good, not too strong and not too weak
+ Good use of silences and sometimes leaving the piano away

Cons:
- Sometimes the piano sounded too "bleep-ish"

Overall:
Very nice song with a good opening. Great bass and piano making the song enjoyable, yet sometimes I found the piano disturbing because of it sounded too "bleep-ish"

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JCsoul responds:

Hey LilFugitive, thx for the extensive review.

As for the piano, maybe it had something to do with the use of rhodes, the mix of both may have made the piano to sound "bleep-ish", although to me it sounds clean...

Anyway, thanks for the review man. Really glad you liked it.

[Acid JazzleFunk]

Nice Acid Jazz ^_^

This is a nice song with great use of synths in the background being led by piano. Let's sum things up:

Pros:
+ Good use of making some parts wild and other calm (was it intentional, only you know)
+ Nice that you used two types of piano, the "pling-pling" piano and the grand piano
+ Synths were cool, some low and other's higher
+ Interesting beat with highats and claps

Cons:
- At some points you could guess when a new part would come in

Overall:
Very nice song with the use of several synths. Two types of pianos and also a simple beat consisting out of highats and claps

[Ear Party Pt.1]

Interesting yet some points need improvement

This is a very nice song, don't think I don't like cuz I gave you an 8, it's just that I review fairly low. Let's sum things up:

Pros:
+ Good sounds, the bass thingy sounded good and fitted everywhere
+ The end was cool
+ I liked the bubble effect in the beginning

Cons:
- The song sounded sort of "dark" yet the rest drum beat didn't try using some samples with some more bass
- When there was a silence at 0:15 you expected there would come something "huge", but the song went basically on as it did before, leaving me dissapointed

Overall:
This is a very nice song with cool effects. The "dark" vibe was lost thanks to the beat, try to improve that.

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[~Terrestrial~ FULL]

Felt surounding...

This song sounds good, yet it misses some things, let's sum things up:

Pros:
+ The beginning surrounds you and welms over
+ You used good sounds
+ The fast parts and afterwards a new instrument were very cool
+ The peeping thing gave the song a cool "twist"

Cons:
- The beat started very boring

Overall:
This is a very nice ambient track, yet the beat couls use some improvement.

mariomusicmaker1 responds:

i am improveing the drums inbetween and after typeing this responce. thanks a bunch for sugestions,