Age/Gender: 17, Male
Location: Amsterdam
Job: Nothing
Hi I'm Daniel Apt, but almost on every online site I go by the alias LilFugitive. Do you want to contact me? Send an email to: apt.daniel@gmail.com
Newgrounds Stats
Whistle Status: Garbage
Exp. Points: 2,510 / 2,840
Exp. Rank #: 11,497
Voting Pow.: 5.76 votes
BBS Posts: 567 (0.43 per day)
Flash Reviews: 48
Music Reviews: 51
Trophies: 0
Stickers: 0
Latest Flash Reviews
Hi there, as usual you made an awesome game! This is what I thought of it: ^_^
Pros:
+ The game was simple, yet it worked fine
+ Music was nice
Cons:
- The game gets much too hard, give the player bigger numbers orso (I lost at lvl 18)
- When you incorectly shoot (or should I say solve) a number the blocks are to big, after a while it's impossible to survive and it just keeps getting worse
Last thoughts:
I really like Edutainment, it's fun and fast, keep making such cool games!
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Hi there, awesome stuff you made, I always sum stuff up, so lets do it!
Pros:
+ Very funny
+ Great voices
+ The transformer part was cool
Cons:
- Lacks originality
- Animation was very basic, just because South Park does it isn't an excuse
Overall:
Cool stuff you made, sadly you definately lack some originality, but it's cool!
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Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
Yes, I do recognize that I "rode the coattails" of popular shows, but I wasn't really aiming for originality, but creativity.
However, if I am trying to parody South Park as close as possible, wouldn't it make sense to try to get the animation as close as possible, regardless of the quality of the original?
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Hi there, congrats on not getting a blam on your first flash. But as you might have noticed (because of the low score) it isn't perfect. Let's sum things up:
Pros:
+ Originality, I think it's a first time animation featuring stuff being drawn in the sand
Cons:
- Short
- Try making the hit area of the button a rectangle instead of just the text
- Try adding sound fx
Overall:
This isn't a bad flash as first flash, yet it needs improvement. Try adding sound fx and make it longer
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Latest Audio Reviews
This song definately starts with an awesome intro, what suprises me is that the intro isn't your style, so it really seemed fresh and new, because sadly a lot of your songs sound similar, luckily this one didn't'.
This song sounded very pop-ish, it sounded really good! Love the effect that came in at 1:50
I do think you should use the intro melody more often through the song.
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Finally a comeback, and a good one!
This sounds more sophisticated and it's awesome. The beginning is awesome and the more lounge stuff also. Sadly I think that it doesn't mix. You should try developing both songs seperately. I don't like the fire effect, sorry.
It took me a while to realize that after the gunshot the drummer got shot down and the beat dissappeared. I found that great and really funny :D!
Keep up the good work, and why the low score.... Let's change that!
3.63 / 5.00 (+ 0.45)
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Hi dude, this stuff is really amazing. I love how good the guitar is. You got this ol-school vibe, what I really love!
Only thing that bothered me was the beat, at some moments it was too simple. But the great guitar compensates it ;)
Btw, congrats on first of jazz!
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