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Lacks originality

Hi there, awesome stuff you made, I always sum stuff up, so lets do it!

Pros:
+ Very funny
+ Great voices
+ The transformer part was cool

Cons:
- Lacks originality
- Animation was very basic, just because South Park does it isn't an excuse

Overall:
Cool stuff you made, sadly you definately lack some originality, but it's cool!

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Chakra-X responds:

Thanks for the review!

Yes, I do recognize that I "rode the coattails" of popular shows, but I wasn't really aiming for originality, but creativity.

However, if I am trying to parody South Park as close as possible, wouldn't it make sense to try to get the animation as close as possible, regardless of the quality of the original?

Funny, but needs improvement

Hi there, Bahamut, again you made a flash that's fine on the story, sadly you'll also need to improve on some stuff. Let's sum things up:

Pros:
+ Story was decent
+ Blue hippo was very well drawn, did you make it, yes? Put that much effort in the other stuff

Cons:
- Art was fairly simple, except BlueHippo
- The talking of Bahamut was simple, as I advised you previously, remove the clock thing and try talking by squashing and stretching.

Overall:
Again you made a nice flash, yet the talking of Bahamut needs to be improved

Murray responds:

Squashing and stretching, eh? That's an interesting idea, but by removing the arrow, my friend would be extremely disappointed, so I can't get rid of the arrow for Bahamut. The other characters, however, I could have a go at stretching and squashing and see how it goes.

Thanks for the review LilFugitive. :)

Please put some more work in to it

Hi there, you made a very simple flash, it needs a lot of work, I'll sum things up:

Pros:
+ Ehm... there was an end

Cons:
- No preloader (if you can't make one, use the one of NG)
- Very simple art
- Used much too many filters
- The talking style looked dumb
- The voices were over exaggerated
- Sometimes voice were very very soft

Overall:
This isn't a good flash, try working on the audio and don't use filters that often. Also improve on your art. Try using the BBS to find better voice actors.

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D3m0n1c707 responds:

I understand were you are going. If you did not find it funny then thats your opion, but the point of this video was to be pointless, just sit back and have a quick laugh
Thanks

Nice serie you got one, yet basic

Hi there Bahamut! Cool serie you got going on, yet I could fully enjoy everything, let's sum things up:

Pros:
+ Audio was of a good quality
+ Not too random
+ Your accent is cool
+ Cool preloader

Cons:
- The characters looked very simple, try joining the arms to the shoulders, use shading, and make the guys look more human instead of some mix between lego guys and human people
- Animation wasn't so good, the way the animator walked looked very very bad
- The talking of bahamut (the sprite) wasn't so good, try using a different indication than the clock arrow (try using stretching and squaching and sync it to your voice)
- Sometimes your voice sounded over exaggerated (e.g. the boring part)

Overall:
This is a nice flash that you made, yet the animation wasn't too good, the voices should be improved and also the talking, also try improving your art

Murray responds:

Not random enough? Oh shit! :O

It's ok, yet sometimes lazy parts in the flash

Nice halloween flash, and also reasonably funny, let's sum things up!

Pros:
+ Nice characters
+ Difference in voices
+ Funny

Cons:
- Sometimes you spent too little time on some things (like the robot arms putting the Detective Grimoire suit on, or the part with "Can't Touch This")
- Spelling mistakes
- Some jokes weren't funny (like the 4AM one)

Overall: Nice halloween themed flash, yet some parts didn't have enough work to it (like the subtitles or certain parts).

PostTimeskipSam responds:

You didn't like the 4am one...I kinda liked it, anyways I'll spend more time on the less important things in animation to improve the overall quality.

Thanks for the review
+Hylian-Mafia+

Nicely done... yet overdone

What you made was a reasonably nice flash. I'll just sum up everything...

Pros:
+ Preloader
+ Crisp audio
+ Sharp pictures

Cons:
- Lacks originality, has been done too often
- For me it wasn't clear what you were supposed to be, the sprite wasn't clear enough. Try not overtransforming them so they lose quality.
- Animation was simple, almost everything consisted of tweened stuff

Overall:
This is a nice flash about yourself, however the animation wasn't too good and the idea has been overdone.

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Murray responds:

Well, the preloader isn't mine exactly. I just borrowed one from NG.

I agree, this isn't very original since it's been done loads of times, but I couldn't resist to make one. On the bright side, at least I didn't go with webcam here.

I guess for those unfamiliar with my flashes may not know what the sprite was, but it was supposed to be Bahamut from FFIV. I've been using that sprite figure as myself for ages now. Also, I know people don't like sprites being too big, but usually, I have them big just to fill up space on the flash screen and to try and put them to a right scale with the background.

Yeah, animation has been one of my biggest weaknesses, but for this flash, I did pick up a few animation skills, even though most of them are tweening.

Thanks for the review LilFugitive. :)

GG!

The gear group is awesome! But the movie could be a bit longer, that would also give the GG a good start, now u sort of wasted tthe possibilities by giving it a bad start

Smiley-Bob responds:

Yeah well, I just made this quick for New Years :D.
It wasn't supposed to be getting us members or be anything epic...just something fun!

Very well done!

The style was really cool, a mix between video and animation. The story was funny and a bit random. I liked the the ghost buster part a lot.

Good Job and make some more cool stuff :)

BritishMoose responds:

I liked that part a lot too and Ido indeed intend to make more cool stuff :)

What is so special about this

I really don't get the fun of this...

It's just a picture with a song... If you added some animation orso I would give some respect, but this is just plain sad...

Just please stop these dumb series...

And Hitler isn't funny

AfroUnderscoreStud responds:

Eh?

If it isn't finished don't post

If it isn't finished don't post it! We want quality work, not half-finished stuff! Also try doing more stuff than only a tank and some bad music

mattuiop responds:

thank 4

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