Nice serie you got one, yet basic
Hi there Bahamut! Cool serie you got going on, yet I could fully enjoy everything, let's sum things up:
Pros:
+ Audio was of a good quality
+ Not too random
+ Your accent is cool
+ Cool preloader
Cons:
- The characters looked very simple, try joining the arms to the shoulders, use shading, and make the guys look more human instead of some mix between lego guys and human people
- Animation wasn't so good, the way the animator walked looked very very bad
- The talking of bahamut (the sprite) wasn't so good, try using a different indication than the clock arrow (try using stretching and squaching and sync it to your voice)
- Sometimes your voice sounded over exaggerated (e.g. the boring part)
Overall:
This is a nice flash that you made, yet the animation wasn't too good, the voices should be improved and also the talking, also try improving your art