Score: 9

"Edutainment rocks!"

submission: TwoThree

date: February 23, 2008

Hi there, as usual you made an awesome game! This is what I thought of it: ^_^

Pros:
+ The game was simple, yet it worked fine
+ Music was nice

Cons:
- The game gets much too hard, give the player bigger numbers orso (I lost at lvl 18)
- When you incorectly shoot (or should I say solve) a number the blocks are to big, after a while it's impossible to survive and it just keeps getting worse

Last thoughts:
I really like Edutainment, it's fun and fast, keep making such cool games!

Score: 7

"Lacks originality"

submission: Darfur Satire Shorts

date: February 10, 2008

Hi there, awesome stuff you made, I always sum stuff up, so lets do it!

Pros:
+ Very funny
+ Great voices
+ The transformer part was cool

Cons:
- Lacks originality
- Animation was very basic, just because South Park does it isn't an excuse

Overall:
Cool stuff you made, sadly you definately lack some originality, but it's cool!

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Score: 5

"Short but has potential"

submission: Sand

date: February 6, 2008

Hi there, congrats on not getting a blam on your first flash. But as you might have noticed (because of the low score) it isn't perfect. Let's sum things up:

Pros:
+ Originality, I think it's a first time animation featuring stuff being drawn in the sand

Cons:
- Short
- Try making the hit area of the button a rectangle instead of just the text
- Try adding sound fx

Overall:
This isn't a bad flash as first flash, yet it needs improvement. Try adding sound fx and make it longer

Score: 5

"Funny, but needs improvement"

submission: BlueHippo's a BBS mod! :0

date: February 5, 2008

Hi there, Bahamut, again you made a flash that's fine on the story, sadly you'll also need to improve on some stuff. Let's sum things up:

Pros:
+ Story was decent
+ Blue hippo was very well drawn, did you make it, yes? Put that much effort in the other stuff

Cons:
- Art was fairly simple, except BlueHippo
- The talking of Bahamut was simple, as I advised you previously, remove the clock thing and try talking by squashing and stretching.

Overall:
Again you made a nice flash, yet the talking of Bahamut needs to be improved

Score: 0

"Lot of work to be done"

submission: Godzillas Depression

date: February 5, 2008

Hi there, this is very bad for a 2nd attempt animation. I'll sum things up:

Pros:
+ There was an end

Cons:
- Very bad graphics
- Very bad animation
- Dumb storyline (I mean come on, it's just about Godzilla without any balls)
- Needs more sounds (like for the talking)

Overall:
This is a flash that needs a lot of work, try putting some more time in it, this is made like in 2 hours or less. Use more sounds for talking and spend more time on the animation and art, art is something you'll have to learn. But animating is fairly easy, you just need patience

Score: 8

"Nice flash with good animation"

submission: A piece of puke

date: February 2, 2008

Nice flash you made, I really enjoyed it, let's sum things up:

Pros:
+ The movements looked very human
+ The music fitted very well with the flash

Cons:
- The flash was short, this would have more potential if you made it longer

Overall:
Very nice flash you made with very vivid and good looking movements. Sadly it was very short, and made the viewer a bit disappointed because he expected much much more.

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Score: 0

"Please put some more work in to it"

submission: Pot Head Bob and a gennie

date: February 2, 2008

Hi there, you made a very simple flash, it needs a lot of work, I'll sum things up:

Pros:
+ Ehm... there was an end

Cons:
- No preloader (if you can't make one, use the one of NG)
- Very simple art
- Used much too many filters
- The talking style looked dumb
- The voices were over exaggerated
- Sometimes voice were very very soft

Overall:
This isn't a good flash, try working on the audio and don't use filters that often. Also improve on your art. Try using the BBS to find better voice actors.

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Score: 6

"Nice serie you got one, yet basic"

submission: News Reporter III

date: January 30, 2008

Hi there Bahamut! Cool serie you got going on, yet I could fully enjoy everything, let's sum things up:

Pros:
+ Audio was of a good quality
+ Not too random
+ Your accent is cool
+ Cool preloader

Cons:
- The characters looked very simple, try joining the arms to the shoulders, use shading, and make the guys look more human instead of some mix between lego guys and human people
- Animation wasn't so good, the way the animator walked looked very very bad
- The talking of bahamut (the sprite) wasn't so good, try using a different indication than the clock arrow (try using stretching and squaching and sync it to your voice)
- Sometimes your voice sounded over exaggerated (e.g. the boring part)

Overall:
This is a nice flash that you made, yet the animation wasn't too good, the voices should be improved and also the talking, also try improving your art

Score: 4

"Ugly characters"

submission: The Fairy Future Mother

date: January 29, 2008

You made an interesting flash with this fairy yet I didn't like it, let's sum things up

Pros:
+ Voices were good
+ Story was good

Cons:
- Ugly characters, really work on the body structure and don't use the pencil that often
- Bad animation, sometimes it looked like he was doing a cripwalk instead of walking
- Blinking looked very bad
- Eyes and mouth looked like that of a girls

Overall:
This is a flash that just should stay in the portal, because of it's nice storyline. But there really needs to be some mayor improvement on the art and animation

Score: 7

"It's ok, yet sometimes lazy parts in the flash"

submission: CandyHolics

date: January 29, 2008

Nice halloween flash, and also reasonably funny, let's sum things up!

Pros:
+ Nice characters
+ Difference in voices
+ Funny

Cons:
- Sometimes you spent too little time on some things (like the robot arms putting the Detective Grimoire suit on, or the part with "Can't Touch This")
- Spelling mistakes
- Some jokes weren't funny (like the 4AM one)

Overall: Nice halloween themed flash, yet some parts didn't have enough work to it (like the subtitles or certain parts).